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глупая ошибка. будущее время с "as".
не "as i will write what you have told"
а "as i write", например.
нарушается размер.
обидно.
тогда так?
speak not, lie hidden and conceal
the way you dream, the things you feel:
i hear both spoken and untold:
your feelings flood the outer world;
but there's no savior there for you -
a thought once uttered is untrue,
and every child is well aware
that we are fake - they do not care
for our sorrows, our fails.
for them we're funny fairy tales.
one may read on for days and days,
but he can not find out the ways
to help us: while they don't believe
in our world, we can not live.
but you don't heed my warnings still:
you're coming up, and soon you will
be locked inside my silent shell.
and so be it. i fare thee well.
не "as i will write what you have told"
а "as i write", например.
нарушается размер.
обидно.
тогда так?
speak not, lie hidden and conceal
the way you dream, the things you feel:
i hear both spoken and untold:
your feelings flood the outer world;
but there's no savior there for you -
a thought once uttered is untrue,
and every child is well aware
that we are fake - they do not care
for our sorrows, our fails.
for them we're funny fairy tales.
one may read on for days and days,
but he can not find out the ways
to help us: while they don't believe
in our world, we can not live.
but you don't heed my warnings still:
you're coming up, and soon you will
be locked inside my silent shell.
and so be it. i fare thee well.